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Great!
I've already told you this, but I really love your dystopia. It's a very well done satire of humankind's fixation on beauty, as well as our society's obsession with a very specific (and unattainable) form of beauty. I also find your dystopia's focus on women intriguing.
Wonderful job!
-Emily J.

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I love this- you can REALLY feel the sarcasm/satire. I love that bit on th e advertisements: "to keep you looking young, fresh, and just like everyone else." :) I enjoyed reading all of it.

T in T
Toddlers in Tiaras is so scary! These parents think this looks good. It should be monitored better.

:'(
But I *love* my toe socks!! :(

This is really cool, btw.

Mara

Toe Socks
I don't think 15 years is long enough...

awesome!
This is so funny, and so true! I love how there's a legitimate fashion police. :)

Cassie Gillette
Very funny and clever! You have a very good way of presenting your ideas to get the full effect of the humor.

Nick Longtin
This is funny and is very relevant to society. Your exaggeration of the expectation to look good and keep up with fashion trends is interesting, but I feel that the expectation in our society is good thing.

Elizabeth
The reality of this article that is supposed to represent an extreme is kind of terrifying. The fact that beauty pageants like this are happening now is shocking and yet it still fits perfectly with your "world". Also, that picture is creeping me out. Just saying.

SO GOOD
KAYTAY!!! I love your dystopia!! It is really creatively written and you mixed the criticism perfectly with the humor. You point was easy to understand and it really made me think about how true this actually is for some people. . . its scary! Hahaha :) Overall, amazing job!!
LOVE elizabeth